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El Precio de una Sombra
60 libras de oro era la recompensa por ella. Al principio, miles de cazadores llegaron a este pueblo buscándola, pero cada hombre terminaba de rodillas suplicando por su vida después de enfrentarse a ella. Uno por uno morían a sus pies.
Su primer crimen había sido simple. Se negó a entregar su libertad y su futuro a tradiciones más antiguas que cualquier persona viva. Por esa razón se convirtió en una forajida. su sola libertad fue suficiente para que los hombres la cazaran.
Era oscura como las sombras de una noche sin luna; sin embargo, su presencia durante el día podía percibirse a kilómetros de distancia. Era un mito, como las brujas, los caballeros o los magos. Las noches y las sombras eran su dominio, y por eso nadie quería estar solo después del atardecer en aquellas tierras.
Ninguna de sus víctimas parecía haber muerto por traición. Cada una murió con un arma entre los brazos, exhausta, como si hubiera entregado su último esfuerzo en medio de una batalla.
Cinco libras de oro aumentaban el precio de su cabeza cada vez que un cazador era encontrado asesinado en estas tierras. Doce hombres muertos en total duplicaron la cifra hasta alcanzar las 120 libras. Su crimen inicial había sido únicamente ir en contra de la tradición y conservar el control de su propia vida, pero cada asesinato hacía crecer su leyenda, empujándola más allá de las fronteras y llevándola a todos los rincones del país a través de decenas de periódicos locales.
Jamás se había ofrecido una recompensa tan grande en estas tierras.
Era más que su propio peso en oro. Parecía una broma semejante cantidad y, por esa razón, grupos de personas llegaron desde todos los rincones del continente para capturarla, viva o muerta.
Durante el día la buscaban por todas partes, incluso debajo de las piedras, pero por las noches detenían la búsqueda y permanecían juntos en el pueblo. Algunas veces un viajero afirmaba haber visto a una mujer vestida de negro sobre una colina distante. Otros juraban haber visto su silueta observándolos desde un tejado antes de desaparecer en la oscuridad. Nadie podía demostrar ninguna de aquellas historias.
Las noches se volvieron cada vez más peligrosas por culpa de la gente. Gente mala en cada esquina: borrachos, apostadores, pendencieros, ladrones, asesinos, extorsionistas y prostitutas. Cada día llegaban al pueblo al menos veinte de estas personas. Muchos de ellos no buscaban justicia, sino oro. Las propiedades ya no estaban ocupadas por sus dueños legítimos, sino por otros que los habían expulsado.
En una noche sin luna, pasada la medianoche, el grito de una mujer se escuchó por todo el pueblo. Provenía de una prostituta que había presenciado un asesinato. Rápidamente, cientos de cazadores acudieron al lugar donde ella lloraba. Antorchas y cuchillos eran sus armas preferidas aquella noche.
Todos rodearon a la mujer esperando escuchar qué había sucedido, pero cada hombre quería ser el primero en oír la historia para obtener la verdad y alguna pista. Nadie confiaba en los demás. Gritaban y la presionaban para que hablara.
Entonces un hombre la empujó violentamente, pero ella no cayó al suelo.
—Nadie me toca de esa manera —dijo.
Un hombre apuñaló a otro en el vientre. Alguien más golpeó al asesino con una antorcha y este comenzó a arder frente a todos. Un frenesí sangriento entre hombres había comenzado en medio de la calle.
Pasaron horas de un mortal combate mientras su vestido se volvía cada vez más oscuro, cubierto de sangre. No había seres humanos en aquel lugar, solo bestias.
Finalmente allí estaba ella, vestida de negro como las sombras de la más oscura de las noches sin luna, observando cómo todos los hombres se mataban entre sí. No importaba si eran amigos, enemigos o incluso familia.
Permanecía inmóvil, contemplando aquello para lo que había sido creada.
No existía recompensa que pudiera compararse con eso.
Después de aquella noche, la propia muerte abandonó este pueblo durante años, horrorizada, y la recompensa de 120 libras de oro fue considerada cancelada.
Comprendieron que no existe suficiente oro para contener una sombra.
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SILLY BLOG
2020.09.27 | Bucaramanga, COLOMBIA
60 pounds of gold was the reward for her. At the beginning, thousands of hunters came to this town looking for her, but every man ended up on his knees begging for his life after facing her. One by one, they died at her feet.
Her first crime had been simple. She refused to surrender her freedom and her future to traditions older than any living person. For that reason she became an outlaw. Her freedom alone was enough for men to hunt her.
She was dark as shadows on a moonless night; nevertheless, her presence during the day was noticeable from miles away. She was a myth, like witches, knights, or wizards. Nights and shadows were her domain, and because of that, nobody wanted to be alone after sunset around these lands.
None of her victims seemed to have been killed by treachery. Each one of them died with a weapon in his arms, exhausted, as if he had given his last effort in the middle of a battle.
Five pounds of gold increased the price of her head every time a hunter was found murdered in these lands. Twelve dead men in total doubled it to 120 pounds. Her initial crime was only going against tradition and keeping control of her own life, but each assassination made her legend bigger, pushing it beyond the frontiers and reaching people across the country through dozens of local newspapers.
No reward that large had ever been offered in these lands.
It was more than her own weight in gold. It seemed to be a joke, such an amount, and for that reason groups of people came here from all over the continent to catch her, dead or alive.
During the day they looked for her everywhere, even under the rocks, but at night they stopped their search and stayed together in town. Sometimes a traveler claimed to have seen a woman in a dark dress standing on a distant hill. Others swore they had seen her silhouette watching from a rooftop before disappearing into the darkness. No one could prove any of these stories.
The nights became more and more dangerous because of the people. Bad people in every corner: drunkards, gamblers, fighters, thieves, killers, extortionists, and prostitutes. Every day at least twenty of these people arrived in town. Many of them were not seeking justice but gold. Properties were no longer occupied by their legitimate owners but by others who had driven them away.
On a moonless night, after midnight, the scream of a woman was heard throughout the town. It came from a prostitute who had witnessed a murder. Quickly, hundreds of hunters rushed to the place where she was crying. Torches and knives were their preferred weapons that night.
Everyone surrounded the woman, waiting to hear what had happened, but every man wanted to be the first to hear the story and obtain the truth and some clues. No one trusted the others. They yelled and pressured her to speak.
Then a man shoved her violently, but she did not fall to the ground.
"Nobody touches me that way," she said.
One man stabbed another in the belly with a knife. Someone else struck the killer with a torch, and he began burning in front of everyone. A bloody frenzy among men had begun in the middle of the street.
Hours of deadly fighting passed while her dress became darker and darker, covered in blood. There were no humans in this place, only beasts.
Finally, there she was, dressed in black like the shadows of the darkest moonless night, watching how every man was killing the others. It did not matter whether they were friends, enemies, or even family. She stood in shock, watching what she had been made for.
There was no reward that could compare to that.
After that night, death itself left this town for years, horrified, and the reward of 120 pounds of gold was considered cancelled.
They understood that there was not enough gold to contain a shadow.

I can already imagine that you must be getting tired of my gym photos, but I don't have anyone to take nice pictures of me, so I have to make do with what I can manage. It is what it is.
These past few days I've been closely following the political situation in Colombia, so I haven't written anything new. Today's piece is something I originally wrote in Bucaramanga with the intention of creating something directly in English.
For this particular piece, Charlotte first translated it into Spanish, and then I edited it again to bring it closer to the original idea.
IF YOU LIKED IT
If you enjoyed this piece by Wil, you might also find these works especially compelling. Each one explores, in its own way, the relationship between fear, myth, violence, and the darkness that human beings often project onto others before discovering it within themselves.
Heart of Darkness — Joseph Conrad
A literary classic about a journey into the unknown that gradually becomes a journey into the darkest corners of human nature. Much like 120 Pounds of Gold, the true horror is not found in the figure being hunted or feared, but in the people who pursue power, wealth, and domination.
This famous short story examines how ordinary communities can normalize cruelty through tradition and collective behavior. The townspeople believe they are protecting their way of life, yet become participants in something monstrous.
Lord of the Flies — William Golding
One of the most powerful examinations of what happens when social order collapses and human instincts take over. As fear spreads, the characters create myths, enemies, and symbols that ultimately consume them.
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